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She's just lying there,
Wishing she was dead,
The cold whispers,
In her head,
You know no one loves you,
That no one cares,
That you'd be better off,
Not even there,
Take out the knife,
Aim at your wrist,
A deep line,
You get the gist,
As the blood flows in a red stream,
This isn't a nightmare it's just a dream,
Write your letter,
While you can,
"Lots of love From Anne",
Crumpled body lay on the floor,
I'm sorry I couldn't take it no more.
Another poem just out of the blue, I hadnt been feeling too happy so what I like to do is channel my emotions into either my art or my poetry. Hope you like it! :)
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alittlebitoffaith Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
I do this as well channel and express my emotions thru my poetry I loved this poem I feel the pain and emotion in this I picture myself in this seen and in this writing and it brought back sad memories and even the pain of cold metal across my skin
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Yumikio-Natsuki-Yoko Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Im glad Im not the only one and Im glad that you like my poem
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alittlebitoffaith Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012
Yes I really liked ur poem
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Yumikio-Natsuki-Yoko Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you I think this is my favourite poem so far
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alittlebitoffaith Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012
It is really good
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Yumikio-Natsuki-Yoko Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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alittlebitoffaith Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
No problem
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CheckerBoardJester Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Fantastic imagery. I hope you write more. :)
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Yumikio-Natsuki-Yoko Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I will. :)
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CheckerBoardJester Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Good to hear :)
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